Hey Im not really qualified to be giving a crit but I think its pretty well on its way. From my point of view the vehicle should be separated from the background more, maybe by casting some of those intense light greens on the right edge. Also the window in the building forms a tangent with the windshield/ roof, which might confuse some people. As for the border I can see it becoming like the others on the layouts but this one has too much black and its taking my eye away from the car. Again I don't know anything but I hope I was somewhat helpful. Good luck!
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Hey Im not really qualified to be giving a crit but I think its pretty well on its way. From my point of view the vehicle should be separated from the background more, maybe by casting some of those intense light greens on the right edge. Also the window in the building forms a tangent with the windshield/ roof, which might confuse some people. As for the border I can see it becoming like the others on the layouts but this one has too much black and its taking my eye away from the car. Again I don't know anything but I hope I was somewhat helpful. Good luck!
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